Once upon time there was a boy named Manu. And he lived on a small island in the ocean.And Manu had a special talent and that talent was reading the stars and the waves. And they had a problem and that was no food and water and their island was too small and the wayfinder got knocked and 2 seconds later he died. And Manu the new wayfinder he polived the problem and he said follow the birds and the whales they will take us to land.
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, April 16, 2021
5 sentence story
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Fantastic writing Alexander! You have covered the details in The Wayfinder really well just in your 5 sentences. Remember that if you take away the And from the beginning of each sentence you won't even notice and they aren't actually needed. It is great to see correct use of capital letters and full stops. Keep up the excellent work Alexander and I will wait to see what you post next.
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